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Bezithan - Cover Art by aJVL Bezithan - Cover Art by aJVL
A story cover art I did for my friend, Chromosome, over at FiMFiction (… ).
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Well, this was certainly more than I expected from the thumbnail that I saw in my notification queue. Now that I get a good look at it, I love the concept and it certainly presents a great tone for something like a cover art, like you said it was for. the brush technique you used for the background and the giant monster thing are quite suited for it, and I love it. the ominous looking mountains on the right hand side add more to the sinister feel of the pic as well that gets denoted from whatever it is that giant creature is. My only problem with the picture thus far as I can tell is that the expression on Twi's face that doesn't seem to fit the atmosphere of seeing a creature who's forehead alone is quite obviously much larger than the mountains. I can't see any kind of eye detail at all that would add to the expression, though the mouth is in a great shocked form for the side view of her head that you went with. I'm sure there was a reason for this, and I won't question your judgement on the matter, but it just seemed odd to me.

So, as follows, for vision, I'll give a 5 because this was an amazing piece that was awe inspiring to see. For originality another 5, seriously, have you seen anything else with this kind of context to it? I haven't! Technique, once more, a 5, ad the brush style is impressive and I love the look of it overall. Impact I'm going to dock to a 4.5 because of the expression on Twi's face, it just seems that it's lacking in some way and it takes away from the picture as a whole for me.
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MedMex3078 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
That creature is one of the most terrifying things I've ever seen.
Krysnha Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
A story with this idea in the mind it would be so awesome
josegoncalo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's cool.
Moonsound Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You have succeeded in interesting me in that book. Beautiful drawing, with a giant creature that actually looks giant.
DeltashockOmnihorn Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Winner 
n-o-n Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
nice ,I like the monster face. 
DemonPanther Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
If I saw something like that, I would hide and hope it didn't see me!
So now the story it was made for has me intrigued. So I shall wait for it to be finished!
NottKenny Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
I don't like the way Twilight looks so much, but overall, it's a really damn nice picture.
GhostDragonSpirit Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Oh jeez.  That creature is freaking awesome.  EVERYPONY'S MAKING ME LOOK PATHETIC!!!  *feels the voice start to take over*


*tries to fight it off* But I'm sure that you were feeling the exact same things I am right now.  I will get to be able to do this one day.  That I can promise.  But of course, the only thing that can compare to this picture right now, is my fanfic I called The Legends of Equestria.  I'm now on book two.  









I discover that Twilight Sparkle...  is my biological sister in my second book, and she plays a key role in the salvation of the universe as we know it, as well as her, I play a key role.

Mogss Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
I really think this should be an mmo rpg game photo
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